An interesting take....
Your visualisation of the Goons is interesting. I think you've missed out on one of the cructial elements of Milligan's (or anyone's, for that matter) sense of humour though, namely TIMING. You took to long to lay the gag out. It's a pity really...most NG viewers are no doubt too young to have any inclination as to who these people are (or least who they're SUPPOSED to be) Never-the-less I commend your efforts. I have most of the series on tape, it's brilliant! The episode you chose is particularily good. That whole bit with the binoculars put me on the floor!